Thursday, 19 November 2015

Cube

WALT : construct 3D shapes 
faces: 6 
Edges:8
Vertices:8


Next time I will make a triangle.


Wednesday, 18 November 2015

Writing term 4


On Sunday We want to my nana house because I will going to zoo. And today my birthday. I was cooking cake  with my nana and my mum. First we go See my dog because my dog sick. And  I come to my nana house. Next we went the zoo and mum said “happy birthday” and I said “ thank you mum”after that  I said “ look!! At bare”my nana said “ I know you like bare !!! ”

                                           


I chose this example because:

I chose this example because it's my writing about recounts in are class.  




Comment from the teacher:


Aomsin, you have learned a lot about speaking and writing in English this year. You have worked so hard to learn. You can write in sentences. You can use capitals and full stops correctly. When people speak, you use speech marks  - “   ”.   not brackets ( ). Brackets are used for adding in an extra mini idea.


How I used the information in this comment to improve my writing:


I changed the speech marks.


What I need to work on now to improve my writing:


I need to use speech marks“ ” when people speak.


Thursday, 12 November 2015

Reading Term 4

I usethe Reading Eggpress app to practise my reading skills.

This page shows that I like reading books and I get lots of eggs.

Tuesday, 10 November 2015

Reading Term 4

WALT  ask good questions to clarify our understanding and to find out information about a topic.



The text we read.We highlighted words  or ideas we didn't understand in red.Then we talked about erosion:what it is and the damage it caused.

Some thing I did well was: highlighting ideas I didn't understand.

Next steps: I need to ask even better questions to get more information from texts.